Doctor Kitty

I didn't find this enjoyable. All I could see was a list of cliches, and the poem really doesn't bring anything original to the table. I've heard these same kind ...

There'll be more... eventually.

Revived and, unfortunately, untouched.

This feels very "teenage melodrama." I suggest putting some more meat on its bones.

I love the word choice; it adds some sophistication. However, the thoughts expressed seem to be incomplete and unrelated. Good words and imagery, but I, the reader, am unaware of ...

Great title and I'm loving the imagery. The progression is great, I must say. From a blank page to whatever you want; this speaks to every writer. Can't come up ...

There's more to come, don't worry. ;) Thanks for the feedback! :D

I love the imagery in the last four stanzas, but the third line in the first stanza didn't feel right to me. The "breaking the light" was great, as well. ...

I added and subtracted some things on the seventh line in attempt to improve the rhythm. Hopefully it sounds better now.

I wrote this after the breakup with my previous girlfriend. I couldn't find any motivation and encouragement, so I made my own.

Whoa. That was wicked. I liked how the "weirdness" wasn't revealed all in one place; rather it was revealed over time. Me likey. Like Meep said, it wouldn't hurt to ...

This made me laugh out loud. Very nice. Me likey.

I changed 'it' to 'they,' as it made more sense, or as much sense as this poem can be allowed to make. :) Thanks for the feedback, Claudette. :D

Snow and trees don't rhyme, so it throws off the familiarity of the tune. Other than that, decent rendition.

Brilliant imagery. I love the story behind it. It didn't follow the same pattern and meter, though, with some clauses rhyming and others not. Well done.